*ждет сегодняшней порции обнимашек, параллельно продумывая план отступления* А вообще, Фаф, всё верно, не считая орфографии.
Some violent bitter man, some powerful man Called architect and artist in, that they, Bitter and violent men, might rear in stone The sweetness that all longed for night and day, The gentleness none there had ever known